tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post7189474506070029993..comments2010-09-24T21:12:01.634-07:00Comments on Smeesus Writes: Red Writing Hood Meme: Dramatic EntranceSmeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08857504068751413483noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-31869063511288289722010-08-28T18:37:46.680-07:002010-08-28T18:37:46.680-07:00i'm with cheryl as far as voice goes - capture...i'm with cheryl as far as voice goes - captures a child's innocence without sounding forced. and you've set up a very real circumstance.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-84074575060003315652010-08-28T14:39:30.351-07:002010-08-28T14:39:30.351-07:00I also think you handled the child's voice ver...I also think you handled the child's voice very well!Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14025221975648580117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-84229878176572554182010-08-27T19:46:02.383-07:002010-08-27T19:46:02.383-07:00Sad and very sweet. Great perspective.Sad and very sweet. Great perspective.Sugar Bearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03888201944243203049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-36487314020335711312010-08-27T13:55:16.183-07:002010-08-27T13:55:16.183-07:00I liked the child's perspective too. I really...I liked the child's perspective too. I really liked the little asides, like liking cookies. Great job!Jessica Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331090466541120750noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-79628741679494350532010-08-27T11:59:03.329-07:002010-08-27T11:59:03.329-07:00She tried so hard to take care of her mom. I like ...She tried so hard to take care of her mom. I like the perspective you went with :)Veronicahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04633663187668003762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-80772806683259413012010-08-27T11:16:14.416-07:002010-08-27T11:16:14.416-07:00Yes, you get into the head of a child so well. Kud...Yes, you get into the head of a child so well. Kudos. That's a hard thing to do.Nancy Chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04313721217543578257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-5608831936648711962010-08-27T09:56:41.000-07:002010-08-27T09:56:41.000-07:00I think it is very challenging to write from the p...I think it is very challenging to write from the perspective of a child and you handled that very well. My fav part was her trying to figure out how to drive the car.Tina L. Hookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12780807680745838371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-85798569193334621652010-08-27T08:44:25.417-07:002010-08-27T08:44:25.417-07:00I agree with Angelia... it "hurt my heart&quo...I agree with Angelia... it "hurt my heart" as well for the kid.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-7042572413885701132010-08-27T08:43:36.993-07:002010-08-27T08:43:36.993-07:00If I didn't know the prompt, the ending would ...If I didn't know the prompt, the ending would have surprised me. I was actually worried about her mom too. Great piece of writing.The Drama Mamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11989820542966245871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-90263335226089071192010-08-27T08:41:38.758-07:002010-08-27T08:41:38.758-07:00Awh, this is so sweet and a little sad. It hurts m...Awh, this is so sweet and a little sad. It hurts my heart to see a child so worried about their mom. Just heartbreaking! I liked the different perspective you used. Nice job! :-)Angelia Sims https://www.blogger.com/profile/07651508374785160575noreply@blogger.com