tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post2428338892079580224..comments2010-09-24T21:12:01.634-07:00Comments on Smeesus Writes: Red Writing Hood Meme: POVSmeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08857504068751413483noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-52281389040352791382010-08-04T09:11:13.628-07:002010-08-04T09:11:13.628-07:00Aw thank you, ladies! This whole project has been ...Aw thank you, ladies! This whole project has been just fantastic for me. And you kind words are greatly appreciated.Smeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08857504068751413483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-91701586490619551512010-08-01T17:00:38.651-07:002010-08-01T17:00:38.651-07:00I thought this was so good and really fun to read....I thought this was so good and really fun to read. I laughed out loud when he called her a kept whore. Shockingly funny - it's one of my favorite kinds of funny.<br /><br />Great work.Missy@Wonder, Friendhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06953028014035929759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-81879028221790252082010-07-31T22:03:37.278-07:002010-07-31T22:03:37.278-07:00Great writing! You really captured the emotion an...Great writing! You really captured the emotion and the dialog was real. Her reaction was perfectly done. Really enjoyed it.Jessica Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331090466541120750noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-71514022616276347082010-07-31T17:18:01.365-07:002010-07-31T17:18:01.365-07:00The hurt and feelings of inadequacy are definitely...The hurt and feelings of inadequacy are definitely there - I felt like I was experiencing them with your main<br /> character. Nicely done!Ericka Clayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03856696977915278068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-33205399288315671182010-07-30T18:04:49.184-07:002010-07-30T18:04:49.184-07:00Oh my!! I didn't see the unfiltered words comi...Oh my!! I didn't see the unfiltered words coming :) They were perfect punches though. You described her reaction so well.Corinne Cunninghamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07604810312185816792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-41533766321497866882010-07-30T16:09:00.087-07:002010-07-30T16:09:00.087-07:00WOW. This was so dang good.
So powerful and full ...WOW. This was so dang good.<br /><br />So powerful and full of strong emotions.<br /><br />I loved it, I was lost to everything else around me when I read it.Alexandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00609629888008025050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-40671096620899143712010-07-30T14:11:22.491-07:002010-07-30T14:11:22.491-07:00really nicely done! love the descriptions of each...really nicely done! love the descriptions of each character. "would have made Hitler proud" was awesome.<br /><br />red dress club...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-13792553766287130952010-07-30T12:58:41.469-07:002010-07-30T12:58:41.469-07:00Visiting from Red Dress Club. I like your style, r...Visiting from Red Dress Club. I like your style, really good writing. This piece came alive for me when I got to the line where he blurts out that she has gone from a slut to a kept whore. I know for these prompts the stories are meant to be short and singular but it would be very interesting to see this written from Austin's viewpoint too. Glad I stopped by, I shall be back to read more and as Erin says maybe you can help me with my writing too :-)One Photohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05793386254564806126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-53375424344224494512010-07-30T11:01:30.078-07:002010-07-30T11:01:30.078-07:00Loved this writing! So smooth, and really showed t...Loved this writing! So smooth, and really showed the characters colors good and bad. Excellent!Angelia Sims https://www.blogger.com/profile/07651508374785160575noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-60895328688805459102010-07-30T09:19:49.220-07:002010-07-30T09:19:49.220-07:00Love how you captured how much words can still hur...Love how you captured how much words can still hurt when they're coming from an ex, no matter how much time has passed. Nice job!Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14025221975648580117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-67212767579316119072010-07-30T08:21:56.246-07:002010-07-30T08:21:56.246-07:00Ooooh, I love your use of the naught language---sl...Ooooh, I love your use of the naught language---slut, whore, prick---helped me feel all the anger. I am not good at that part. The dialogue is delish. Good job and I'm so glad our paths have crossed!! Maybe you can help me w/ my writing?!?!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13214914707096410664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519180696126754628.post-6481944118674108072010-07-30T07:37:20.047-07:002010-07-30T07:37:20.047-07:00wonderful story. very well written, I really felt...wonderful story. very well written, I really felt his anger and then his embarrassment. Great writing!Christyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11190148251096131674noreply@blogger.com